??Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but they should be concerned about the quality of work. To what extent you agree or disagree？

?? 写作思路????

职工的作业体现当然重要，可是职工的着装是不是重要，取决于作业的性质。假定是一些不需要和人面临面打交道的作业，比方程序员和会计，只需可以准时保质地结束使命，其实作业的时分穿啥是可以自立选择的。可是某些作业的着装却有需求，比方护士和空乘，标准共同的着装给人作业化的感触，再比方出售，正式的着装体现出对客户的尊敬，可认为公司树立杰出的形象，也可以赢得更多客户。

?? 要点词汇与语料????

dress code 着装需求

depend on 取决于

top priority 最优先的

work performance 作业绩效

be irrelevant to 与…无关

on time 准时

up to the standard 抵达标准

dress casually 着装休闲

bring their initiatives into full play 充分发扬活泼性

professionalism 作业化

put on makeup 扮装

show respect 标明尊敬

appropriate 适合的

leave a good impression 留下好形象

vary??各纷歧样

?? 参阅范文????

A certain dress code is required for employees in many companies, but some people believe that employers should care about how employees perform rather than how they dress at work. In my opinion, whether there should be rules for employees’ dressing depends on their positions and careers.?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??

Undoubtedly, the top priority that employers should consider is staff’s work performance, which seems to be irrelevant to their dressing styles. In some occupations such as programmers, accountants and machine operators, what they wear does not affect the quality of their work, as long as they can finish the task on time and up to the standard. A good example is that some technology companies allow employees to dress casually or wear whatever clothes they want. This policy creates an informal, fun and creative environment, in which employees can bring their initiatives into full play.?? ??

However, there are some work situations where staff’s dress may influence the image of the company and the performance of employees. For some professionals such as nurses and flight attendants, the strict dress code can foster professionalism. By wearing the uniform at work, employees give clients more confidence in the services provided by the hospital and the airline company. Similarly, a sales person needs to dress formally and sometimes put on makeup to show respect for his or her customers. This kind of job involves a large amount of interaction with others and the appropriate dressing can leave a good impression with the customers, which may result in more business opportunities.??

In conclusion, it is essential for employees to present high performance at work and the dress code can vary according to the company’s business and the employee’s position.????

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注：徐卫教师自创参阅范文，文中主张仅代表教师情绪，未经答应阻止悉数商业用处。

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